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Thursday, January 13, 2022

Kristen Zimmer, Natasha West, and others

As many of you guys know, I have been furiously reading the less expensive Girl-Girl stories on Amazon, and thoroughly enjoying myself, for the most part.  Some of the outstanding authors I have encountered there are:  Kristen Zimmer; Olivia Waite, Siera Maley, Natasha West, (I'm going to add to this list as I remember the other names).

Here is a review on Kristen Zimmer's story When Sparks Fly. When Sparks FlyWhen Sparks Fly by Kristen Zimmer
My rating: 5 of 5 stars

This was a wonderful book, nicely written, and certainly was a lot of fun to read, though it was suspenseful at times.

I'm comparing it to a number of other stories that take place in the senior year in high school, and what sets this one apart is that the two girls are thoughtful adults. There's a lot about (1) photography, which caught my attention, a lot about (2) high school education, a lot about (3) finances and economics, and about (4) the foster care system. All, or most, of these topics were handled seriously by Kristen Zimmer.

What I did not know much about, at all, was the geography of the greater Boston area, the restaurants, the parks, the tourist attractions, etc, and at times Kristen seemed to think of these as background information that anyone ought to know! Of course it was quite possible to follow the story along very closely without this added information, but that doesn't make it any less annoying!

But the personalities of the three main protagonists, and the parents, were brilliantly delineated, and it was they who kept me riveted. I have read other books by K.Z, but none came close to the quality of this one; and I conclude that this story was based on girls that Kristen knew well—fortunate woman!—and how fortunate the author who has led a life rich enough to have it as a source for delighting her readers.

Let me add that the title of the story: "When Sparks Fly" reveals less than nothing about the theme of the story.  70% of the books on Amazon have nondescript, or actually misleading titles.  Amazon must have a policy of requiring crappy titles from its authors.

A word about British author Natasha West.  This woman is insanely funny!  Of course, those who live in Britain will find the stories even funnier, because of her extensive use of colloquialisms, in particular, catchy net words and expressions, used by young people, which doubtless convey associations and meanings we can't even hope to catch.  (On the other hand, Brits might well be jaded enough to simply read right through these expressions, since they might be so familiar.)  But the humor is only interjected to keep our attention; there are fraught situations that the more emotional reader might need a tissue to handle.  One thing I love about Natasha West is that she writes about couples both women of which are definitely femmes.  The story of hers I read most recently is about two girls—women, really; they're about 28—who are girls through and through. One is a little more combustible, but you could never imagine her as a guy; you simply couldn't.

Another of these authors that I love, is Siera Maley.  I have read a half-dozen of her books, but the one I love the most is: Dating Sarah Cooper.  This one is funny, just thinking about the story, and the characters, especially the aforementioned Sarah Cooper, a crazy BFF who launches herself headfirst into almost any project, however risky.  You're wincing throughought the story, in anticipation of what Sarah might do, but you have to love her.  I had friends like that, and I loved them to pieces!  Luckily, none of them were as heedless as the fabulous Sarah.

Kay

Monday, January 3, 2022

My Christmas Story

This story, of which spake the prophets of old (just kidding; nobody spake of it), is---and I blush to say it---just half of a story.  I have a rough idea how to fill it out, but being the coward that I am, I don't want to get started on it.  But there is a lot of story in this first part already.

Another feature of it is: it is about a group of high-school kids from a variety of schools, who have been brought together to sing the Bach Christmas Oratorio, or the Weihnachtsoratorium, as Germans call it.  There is a lot of authorial gushing about the Oratorio, but you might be able to ignore all that.  I just love music, and I find it hard to hide that.

There are two girls, 11th-graders, who are, in my mind, approaching a sort of romantic relationship with each other, but in the story so far, there is very little explicit mention of a relationship.  It is full of Christmas Spirit, because I wrote it about 10 years ago, before I was standing in the corner, losing my religion!  Don't get me wrong; I love Jesus, most of all, and all of those who enter into his story, but I hate the way the modern church is controlled by people with no imagination, and no real understanding of what Jesus would do if he were alive today.

Kay